[Naeem]

Hey guys. Here's soemthing i spent a couple of hours on so far. It's a birthday present for my best friend. I really need ur advice in improving it. What do u think of it? Would this do? Would this even make a good birthdya present? Any crits on improving this? Thanks a bunch.

veersion 1 (still working):


worked some more on it. more of a final version:


crits?

[stacy]

I like it. It will make a great birthday gift.


C&C:
More highlight on the hill on the left.

It needs some kind of color counter-point.
Maybe the orange glow of a campfire somewhere
in the lower right area.