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intellation junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Oct 2004 Posts: 2 Location: boston mass.
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Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2004 7:21 pm |
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http://www.intellationarts.com
please let me know what you think, but be aware that the site is brand new and still going through growth spurts. thanks! |
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JugOfbees junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Oct 2004 Posts: 6
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Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2004 8:05 pm |
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I think that you will come to realize this on your own eventually, but illl make the point anyways -- that is, avoid the use of filters in photoshop, or any other prescripted events that take creative control away from YOU. You might notice that as you use more filters your artwork slowly becomes less of your own unique vision, and more the vision of the programmers that made the filters.
The filters in your art are extremely distracting -- and since you label them "photoshop abstracts" it becomes even more clear that they are products of photoshop, and not products of you.
If you like the effect you are obtaining, I would suggest thinking in terms of programming your own "filters," thus bringing the creative control back to yourself and still achieving a repititious feel.
I would also cut down on the image intensity of your website, it takes awhile to load.
Hope that helps, although I think that you will see this on your own as you keep working. |
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weaselball2 member
Member # Joined: 15 Jun 2004 Posts: 101
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Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2004 9:04 pm |
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I agree on both points
your website takes a few seconds to load even on my 3mbps cable. Either get a server that allows you more bandwidth, or compress the images a bit more.
I also agree with the use of filters: filter-made art is always easy to spot. Try drawing something yourself using NO filters, only a graphics tablet and brushes. |
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dhood member
Member # Joined: 08 Dec 2003 Posts: 146 Location: United States
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 10:05 am |
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I agree with the crits above. I think it needs a little work.
There is an overabundance of filtered art on the net. |
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