[xzacto]

I know something is wrong with it, or something needs to be done. I am
not sure what though... any suggestions?


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[h04x]

First of all, good work overall, just needs a few minor touchups.
I did a quickie draw over to show some stuff.

First: Your perspective is a little off. Look at the lines I drew in the pic and you can see how the perspectives of the spinner, prop blades, fuselage and engine cowling are just slightly off. A little more development early on will help with that. Draw out some loose perspective lines early in the drawing on a seperate layer and it will help keep all the finished forms in line.

Second: The sides of the cowling and fuselage look a bit slab sided. Bringing th e lighter values down the cowling and fuselage slightly further, and a little broader fade from light to dark value will help this area to look a bit more rounded and give it a better render of volume. I drew in some quickie highlights to show what I mean.

Thats about it from me. Could use a little more detail render on the right side of the image, but it is a WiP..


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