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IHeartBoobs
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:02 pm     Reply with quote
Here's an illustration I'm doing for one of my classes. The rock she's sitting on is going to be in the middle of a lake, and there will be a fire behind the trees in the background. C&C would be greatly appreciated Smile
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 8:42 pm     Reply with quote
nice lava Razz Shocked

I really like the sky you did, looks promising enough to check back here every once in a while.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 1:01 am     Reply with quote
Looks good. The smoke is a bit weird though. The shape made me think it was a plastic bag at first until I followed it to the source. Looks like she swam there, which makes the dry cig look a bit out of place... still its a funny symbol. The tree shapes are great and the little shack just visible is a great touch.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 10:34 am     Reply with quote
I think the light being reflected by the white seems outta place. It looks like a line of orange...i think they should be toned down a bit so they are hinted rather then stated...
here is a good example
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IHeartBoobs
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 2:52 pm     Reply with quote
makototaramoto wrote:
I think the light being reflected by the white seems outta place. It looks like a line of orange...i think they should be toned down a bit so they are hinted rather then stated...
[img]http://gladstone.uoregon.edu/~cvoodre/SF%20Trip%20Pics/sunset.jpg[img] here is a good example

Ah yes, I was really wondering about that. Thank you Smile

Edit: I'll also try to do something about the smoke, and make the cigarette more visible
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