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IHeartBoobs junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Sep 2004 Posts: 4
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Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 2:02 pm |
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Here's an illustration I'm doing for one of my classes. The rock she's sitting on is going to be in the middle of a lake, and there will be a fire behind the trees in the background. C&C would be greatly appreciated
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Greensun member
Member # Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 92 Location: Almere, Netherlands
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Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 8:42 pm |
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nice lava
I really like the sky you did, looks promising enough to check back here every once in a while. _________________ Rabies up your bunghole |
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Ian Jones member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 1114 Location: Brisbane, QLD, Australia.
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Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 1:01 am |
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Looks good. The smoke is a bit weird though. The shape made me think it was a plastic bag at first until I followed it to the source. Looks like she swam there, which makes the dry cig look a bit out of place... still its a funny symbol. The tree shapes are great and the little shack just visible is a great touch. |
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makototaramoto member
Member # Joined: 15 Apr 2002 Posts: 135 Location: NY
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Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 10:34 am |
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I think the light being reflected by the white seems outta place. It looks like a line of orange...i think they should be toned down a bit so they are hinted rather then stated...
here is a good example _________________ mercer |
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IHeartBoobs junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Sep 2004 Posts: 4
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Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 2:52 pm |
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makototaramoto wrote: |
I think the light being reflected by the white seems outta place. It looks like a line of orange...i think they should be toned down a bit so they are hinted rather then stated...
[img]http://gladstone.uoregon.edu/~cvoodre/SF%20Trip%20Pics/sunset.jpg[img] here is a good example |
Ah yes, I was really wondering about that. Thank you
Edit: I'll also try to do something about the smoke, and make the cigarette more visible |
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