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Author   Topic : "MY FIRST PIECE UP FOR REVIEW"
fathomsforty
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 6:06 pm     Reply with quote
hi.
the photographer, told me I could do anything I wanted to it, and this is what I saw in my head, I showed it to him and he loves it except he doesn''t care for from his knees down and I agree. So any suggestions and critiques would make me very happy.
thank you.
-heather
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makototaramoto
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 6:25 pm     Reply with quote
well i think that it might work better if the 'smoke' was more transparent like a fog or a mist...also you might be able to crop the picture to eliminate dead space which is on the top...im assuming the feat are causing the even yet from the picture it is hard to say if he is wearing shoes,or sneakers
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fathomsforty
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 3:42 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for the comment
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 8:30 pm     Reply with quote
It looks like he has a stubby little tail Razz
The negtive shape just made it seem that way.
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