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PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 1:13 am     Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 3:54 am     Reply with quote
That is pretty cool. It has potential and I like the textures.

But some things bother me a little. The symmetry makes it a little boring.
Are there guys walking on the path? It could be a cornfield Wink
You could simplify in some areas and make the important areas more readable ... for example add some contrast.

Also the way the sky is painted suggests a lower horizon than the perspective of the path and the buildings.
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