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feeblepenguin
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 Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2004 2:07 pm |
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Hey everyone, I haven�t posted for a while but its the beginning of a new quarter at school so ill have time to do some personal paintings before midterms kick in. here is a 50 min. sketch from photo reference of a very pretty cosplayer named Haruka. Im focusing on trying to achieve the most with the fewest strokes and pay more attention to proportion, color observation, tone and light then with detailed rendering, so any comments in that vein would be appreciated, thanks.
Ali
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feeblepenguin
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| Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2004 12:55 pm |
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here are two more in this series
im dissapointed with the lack of feedback in this forum so this will probably be my last post.
if anyone here cares you can see my work here at my web gallery
http://photobucket.com/albums/v58/feeblepenguin/
and in other art forums like cgtalk and eat poo and conceptart.
here is my latest piece and my parting image for this forum:
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Matthew
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| Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2004 1:08 pm |
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hey feeble. Yea it is hard to get replies but if you keep posting u will get more comments, me promise.
that first one above in the first post felt a little bit stiff but these latest and some of those on your site are really good. Haruka_2nd and figmalesmall1.jpg me really likes. 
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BC1967
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| Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 6:08 am |
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I really loke the first three. You've a great sense of movement and color.
The line work is very well handled too.
My only crit would be that the head in the model sheet is a bit small for the body.
Nice work! Keep it up.
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BC1967
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| Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 6:08 am |
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I really loke the first three. You've a great sense of movement and color.
The line work is very well handled too.
My only crit would be that the head in the model sheet is a bit small for the body.
Nice work! Keep it up.
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Heysoos
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| Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 12:39 pm |
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nice. I really like how you handled the hands and costumes. The faces might be a bit overdone in the last two.
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| Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 1:57 pm |
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| right click - save as for that last one. |
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