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bellas
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Rocco - X
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| Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2004 4:39 pm |
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| tight. if this is a WIP then i would say you should tweek the values a little. add some depth. some contrast. then give us an update. i wanna see. |
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judson
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| Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2004 7:13 am |
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| Awesome, I love it... no critics... |
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| Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2004 7:29 am |
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all i can say is wow. if you added color, it would be even better. keep up the great work.
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bellas
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| Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2004 2:55 am |
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thanks for look guys n_n mmmmm well ddawghurl in a future I paint a version with watercolor. See you.
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| Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2004 3:00 am |
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Beautiful work 
I'm stuck between two minds of whether or not in needs more depth. Since It's looks a bit flat with no real shadow in there.
But then again, I like that look  |
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jrwells
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| Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2004 9:49 pm |
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| The shading is fabulous, especially the linens. The only thing that looks off to me is the nose, it looks a little funky. And the hair apears a little flat because the value range is constant from the front to back. Exceptional work none the less. |
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PyroX
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| Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2004 4:37 pm |
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thats f**king amazing I like how smooth it looks and adding color I think would screw it up. It's perfect in pencil. There are some drawings that just shouldn't have color and this is one of those.
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Symgoth
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| Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 7:01 pm |
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| purdy.lovely. You have awesome pencil skills. |
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Warhead82
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| Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 8:39 am |
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very nice, good work on the shading, also, nice job done, on the drappery foldings.
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