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Hub
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 Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2004 6:54 pm |
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Hi, i will tell you now that my english is very poor. so no flame please thx.
I have began to draw one month ago and that its my first "good" drawing I guess... C & C will be greatly apreciate! thx
P.S. you can talk freely in english I understand very well I just not able to speak in this lanquage. |
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Hub
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| Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2004 6:55 pm |
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I forgot to mention that my drawing is not finish he  |
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Jsi-spitz
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| Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2004 7:07 pm |
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Cool perspective 
Keep working on it!
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jrwells
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| Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2004 8:19 pm |
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| Before you get too far along coloring this picture, I would suggest reworking the figure that looks like he is collapsed in her left arm. His back is very stiff, and he does not appear to be lifeless. Also it looks lke his left arm is going through where her left shoulder should be. Other than that it looks like a decent start, post updates please. |
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PyroX
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| Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2004 4:28 pm |
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jrwells it morely looks like her arm enters his side.
Its a good start expecially if you just started drawing a month ago keep at it and you'll be great.
P.S. You got a wild imagination, in a good way.
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Rocco - X
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| Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2004 9:14 pm |
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| i would say that the most imediate thing you need to work on for this picture is her face. then again that on her arm does look like a human chair. |
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Warhead82
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| Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 8:43 am |
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I say for you start from the beginning start drawing quick 3d basic shapes, shading, learn the colour wheel, human anatomy, cause this shows alot of mistakes.
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