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eyewoo
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 Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2004 1:09 pm |
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More LuckyLou second generation illos...
Left and right pages for pages 12 and 13:
...and pages 16 and 17
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| Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2004 5:21 pm |
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amazing fantastic eyewoo!!!!
I'm sure the book will do very well
such charming illustrations.
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| Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2004 7:01 pm |
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nice work again eyewoo...however in the 2nd pic u posted the trees in the background bother me. They dont have the same black outline as everything else, it makes those trees look as if theyre out of place... 
also i noticed the direction in which you have composed everything. It goes from left to right, however this also means that it might get to a point where you only see the back of the character and not his frontside. E.g in the 1st and 2nd, his back is to the reader. My opinion is, maybe in the next pages or so that you could make the various composition of him facing towards the viewer rather than having his back turned to the viewer... |
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eyewoo
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| Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2004 10:28 am |
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Freddio... Thanks... I hope so, but first I have to find a publisher, which is quite difficult...
Joe84... these are only 2 two pages sets of 15 all together. There are a number of pages where the back of his head is toward the back... 
I have 3 two page sets left to do. When I get it finished, I'm going to show the whole thing online...
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| Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2004 2:25 am |
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I'm looking forward to see them!
PS: Agree with the treetrunks in the second.
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| Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2004 7:31 am |
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Yep! also agree with the tree trunk problem... I've changed it and think it works better now.
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| Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2004 7:34 am |
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| really great eyewoo...i love the light palette |
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| Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2004 9:53 am |
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| I agree, this is really nice work! |
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