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watmough · Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2004 1:09 pm

im done with this(just been looking at it way too long).i did it from a 5 minute magic marker sketch of my girlfriend so 99.9 percent of this is from memory.i just cant tell if it sucks or if it looks ok,ive just been staring at it for about 6 hours and i dont know anymore...anybody?

math · Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2004 5:38 am

looks like its a doll with eyes painted on her face. they need more..well depth ;p
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watmough · Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2004 6:17 am

your right...i can definitely see that,so hard for me to work from memory....thanks for the reply math

math · Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2004 1:06 pm

hm yeah im a bit sorry i didnt say anyhting positive. to be nice i could tell u know i cant draw anything familiar like that at the moment. cuz ur more skilled than i am! well some other thing. the shadow in her face on the left side...is a bit hard. and what happened to the shadows on her erm..boob area. dunno what thats colled in english. but well maybe just define the face a bit more. the "borders" are a bit "bubbly". well just on the right side. okay..im starting to be like a teacher again and thats BAD cuz i dropped out of school and i never studied much arts so i shall shut up now.

bye and keep going.
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watmough · Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2004 6:29 am

no,math,trhats exactly what i need to hear,honest critique.i dont get much of that which is why i post here on sijun.here is the sketch i worked from(over)to give u a better idea what i had to work with.like i said ,working from memory is NOT what i am best at.i really,really struggle with it,so your critique is important.thanks again