[||STEBO||]

just finished


i'm tryin' to learn...
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[King Brolly]

what exactly are you trying to learn?
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[||STEBO||]

[King Brolly]

haha we have the same goal.
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[Heysoos]

I think it would look a lot better without those sharp lines. Stick with the softer modeled look that you used on the chest and arms. The arms confused me at first too, they seemed to be missing the entire upper arm before I realized that they were just hidden by perspective. You should do something so that the forarms don't look so attached to the shoulders. keep on learnin

[Matthew]

King Brolly, please pay respect to the Signature rules:

Signature image rules:

. They must be made from your own art
. No taller than 40 pixels
. No wider than about 300 pixels
. You can have animated gifs, but keep the filesize in the 2kb-10kb range
. Nothing of an inappropriate nature

Matthew

[kornedup]

Thanks for steppin' in Matthew that was getting very disturbing...

[||STEBO||]

at least he posted an opinion...
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[Matthew]

||Stebo||, yea you are right there.

I wasn't sure what kind of crits I wanted to give u so I left it alone instead, and it seems u are going for a different look aswell and then it is very difficult to give crits.
The shoulders and underarm parts works for me but then u haven't lit the head the same way as the body since her left hand suggests light from that direction. The hair could be thicker and the hands could show the joints and the lit areas more but all this is if you want more realism and ,or if and maybe u are going for another direction as mentioned earlier. As said before I didn't wanna really give a crit like this cause it may only sound harsch so I hope u don't get me the wrong way here.

Speed movement can be conveyed in many different ways also and this I like how you added motion blur to the skirt and how some strings of hair moves in the top, but, speed can be felt in the background aswell if you add some parts and or paint in the perspective direction.

ok it sounded like u wanted sincere crits so I hope they helps, I like that u want to keep learning and I am tryin to keep learning too but it is difficult and sometimes it is difficult to give crits to I believe since I myself is struggling with a lot of things in art.

keep painting.
have a nice day
Matthew

[||STEBO||]

tnx a lot for the crits [expecially after when i'll finish to translate them in italian ] and for the time u spent for me

see ya!!!
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