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flx
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80 mis so far.
c&c ppl... let me have it
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| Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 7:06 pm |
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here is a little more
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| Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 5:08 am |
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i m nost taking this much further but i need some colour and background ideas
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| Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 11:11 am |
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| cool, I definetely see an improvement over your dragon thing. You should work on defining the details more,and bringing some darks into the creature especially in key areas such as around the eyes. The composition is okay but could be better. As for the background, you probably shouldn't try to do too much with it, but you should get rid of the solid pitch black as it makes the creature look washed out. Good work so far, keep going, this could turn into something very cool. |
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| Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2004 7:35 am |
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| I must say that I am dissapointed and impressed. When I saw the first pic as it was downloading, I thought it was a cartoony bear with cool sunglasses and his paw on his forehead going "oh damn!". Then I saw you were really making a monster so I went "aw damn!". Still it's cool. I would really put some, dark blue or purple in the lower left hand areas if I were you though. I have no experience in coloring, it just seems like it would be cooler to my eyes. Oh, and bring up the contrast a notch. |
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flx
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| Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2004 8:22 pm |
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colour is deff going to change from here...too saturated 4 my liking
pushed up the contrast a little bit (good eye heysoos)... am going to psuh pull it some more b4 the final.
teady bear?!?... i stared at the pic forever and i still dont see it... try emphisizing (sp) it for me... it sounds like a cool image the way u described it. colour is not my strong point either... i am actually quite inept that way... i will try it with the purple... post it if i get something from it... in the meant time...
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