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Dodge member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2003 Posts: 52 Location: uk
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2004 4:32 am |
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Done for a Client with space at the top for text. Hand drawn and digital. Second version i did of this, the first composition was lacking dynamism and something else,, hopefully captured something better here.
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Last edited by Dodge on Sun Dec 18, 2005 6:23 am; edited 1 time in total |
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desmozgenes member
Member # Joined: 04 Dec 2002 Posts: 83 Location: Osijek, Hrvatska (Croatia)
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Posted: Sun May 30, 2004 9:52 am |
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hmm.. I don't really like the monster.. looks kinda rubber
and the background.. it's supposed to be the woods? don't feel like it that much really. :/ _________________ A.K.A. deity |
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Dodge member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2003 Posts: 52 Location: uk
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Posted: Mon May 31, 2004 6:37 am |
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looks kinda rubber..... err yeh thanks dont really like your tone.
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ZooManiac junior member
Member # Joined: 31 May 2004 Posts: 8
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2004 8:15 pm |
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I like it its al little too blurry for my style but i still like it...hmmm Reminds me of Runescape, looks like green dragon leather.
its pretty good, i might darken it a little to make the monster kinda more scary but i i like it
(edit) The arrows that are in the monster are a little fat _________________ ~Radio Head___Modest Mouse___Cold Play~ |
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Dekard member
Member # Joined: 01 Nov 2001 Posts: 274
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 9:15 am |
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also, just a suggestion it's odd seeing an archer get into melee range. Look into some dynamic posing books as well. Good stuff though. |
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Dodge member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2003 Posts: 52 Location: uk
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 11:51 am |
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Zoomaniac: Thanks, i agree with darkening the monster, had that mentioned to me before about this pic, shame i wont go back to this but it helps on the next pictures.
Dekard: Cheers, yeh i wanted to keep it close to add impact, hence the monster almost bearing down upon him, a different angle may have worked better with hindsight.
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