[_zaphod_]

good thing it's not moving life or else i'd REALLY be in trouble HA-HA

This is my second attempt at a still life. I actualyl finished it, and although it's not as good as the other finished works, I consider it finish and not a sketch because it was really ahrd for me to do.

Critiques please. You can be harsh, but please tell me wha ti should do rather than just telling me waht's wrong (or ways to get better, like exercises).

Thanks

[math]

definitly just go on doing this. u say its ur 2nd attempt. i mean, if u wanna get good u need more than 2 attempts so just keep it up. its not crappy.
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[thekirill]

i really like this, it's is simple, and interesting to look at, the refracted lemon makes it work. Keep it up.