[garreta]

Hi
This is what I'm currently working on. I am planning to add some forests and water to it. But before, I'd like to know your opinions about it and what I should change before continue. I think there's a problem with the background mountains also...
Don't be afraid of being rude. critizice the minimum detail please
Thanks!
EDIT3 : This is the latest step i have. The previous one is not visible at the moment


You can check a larger version here:
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/9760/stupiddayonabrokenworld.jpg

EDIT
Here's a new step of it
Any suggestions on which elements could I add? (specially in that "hole")

[Kagri]

Hey, garreta! It seems like the colour of the grass is a bit unnatural. It's just so bright, maybe you should try adding some other shades to it? I heard somewhere that when drawing grass you better not take "real", pure green as a base colour, but always mix it with other colours - like ochre (but never yellow!), or smth. About the mountains I can't really tell anything - it does give an impression of prespective and that they're very far away... Maybe you just should make them differ one from another? These look more like hills, and if you take care that each mountain has a slightly different shape, I'd bet it's gonna help a lot. Good luck!

[garreta]

Great thanks Kagri! As you can see, I've added details to the mountains. I kinda like how the grass looks like though

[The Real Mark]

There is a big gap to the left of center, not sure what it is or what it is meant to be. I think this area might need some more detail, probably a distiction between the two areas (grass and cliff) or just a clear whole.

It's not too bad though - whats it for?