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hom6281
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 7:21 am     Reply with quote
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hom6281
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 7:23 am     Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 7:28 am     Reply with quote
I have to say you have done a decent job on the coloring. I see that the hands of the characters are a bit off from what a real life person woud have. Your image doesnt seem to be finished* to me. Your on a good start though.
The hair, seems like it has 2 pounds of gel on it. I would suggest adding more volume to it. Her purple belt doesnt seem to be bent much, I would suggest adding a few more shadows. Overall I think you did a good job, even better then what I would have done.

*to you it might be finished, but to me I think you need a little more work. Wink
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 7:45 am     Reply with quote
There are some serious muscle/anatomy problems with the man's arm.
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