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hom6281 junior member
Member # Joined: 09 Jun 2004 Posts: 2 Location: http://home.pchome.com.tw/comics/hom6281/
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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 7:21 am |
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me derive from Taiwan to request to offer an opinion.
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hom6281 junior member
Member # Joined: 09 Jun 2004 Posts: 2 Location: http://home.pchome.com.tw/comics/hom6281/
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Yarik member
Member # Joined: 11 May 2004 Posts: 231 Location: Russian/Ukrainian American in California
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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 7:28 am |
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I have to say you have done a decent job on the coloring. I see that the hands of the characters are a bit off from what a real life person woud have. Your image doesnt seem to be finished* to me. Your on a good start though.
The hair, seems like it has 2 pounds of gel on it. I would suggest adding more volume to it. Her purple belt doesnt seem to be bent much, I would suggest adding a few more shadows. Overall I think you did a good job, even better then what I would have done.
*to you it might be finished, but to me I think you need a little more work. ![Wink](images/smiles/icon_wink.gif) |
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LadyHydralisk junior member
Member # Joined: 17 Apr 2004 Posts: 31 Location: Memphis TN
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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 7:45 am |
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There are some serious muscle/anatomy problems with the man's arm. |
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