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Wagner
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 Posted: Mon May 10, 2004 3:36 pm |
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well, i'm having trouble painting the face in my picture. the person in the picture is a cyborg type thing escaping from a building, that has spotlights and stuff looking for it. the cyborg stuff isn't painted at all yet, and the sketch is too transparent to see.
anyways, any help would be nice. anatamy problems, composition suggestions, coloring suggestions. any help at all would be greatly appreciated, some of the problems i already plan on fixing, like moving the lightsource, but other problems i might not have noticed yet  .
thanks
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Wagner
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| Posted: Mon May 17, 2004 4:46 pm |
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well, I finished it. It was pretty rushed, but I think it turned out pretty good for me. Any comments and criticisms are appreciated.
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Al Ian
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| Posted: Wed May 19, 2004 4:59 am |
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The basic layout and theme is good. However the shading looks flat. Remember the image is shapes, visualize the object his head is and shade it that way.
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