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obmp junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Oct 2003 Posts: 16 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2004 12:30 am |
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Posting the latest oilopainting I'm working on(1x1.5 meters), if you saw my previous "I Was A Hero Once" you'll know where I got my Idea for this one from
C&C is always welcomed, hope you like it!!
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Simoom member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2002 Posts: 302 Location: nc, usa
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2004 12:39 am |
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Very cool. I love the stylized coloring, particularly on her hair and clothing. You also have a really nice handling of light on her shiney fabric jumpsuit.
The main problems i see is particularly with her face. the manner of coloring makes it look rather flat compared to the vibrant colors around it. I'd suggest using more color variation on her face to show shadows and highlights like you did with her outfit.
I like the pose, but i don't think its quite as dynamic as it should be for this style. Bending her body a little more might help out a lot to give it that cartoonish action look. I'm not quite sure how she's moving, or even if she's the one falling or the robots.
Despite those complaints, this is very cool, and i'd only comment on things like this if i everything else was already awesome. i like the traditional media as well. |
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Lenoa junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Mar 2004 Posts: 4 Location: Florida
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2004 3:37 pm |
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I think she's pretty cute and dangerous. There are a few things you could improve though.
The look on her face looks like she's not exherting any energy to knock those robots out. It looks like she's in a dreamy/sleepy state.
Also, the left arm is really short. If it's being foreshortened, the hand also needs to be smaller. It's just out of proportion/perspective.
Other than those few things, the picture is great. Keep up the good work. |
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