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sam r. kennedy
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2004 7:06 am     Reply with quote
This is my first post, so be nice.



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jfrancis
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2004 8:03 am     Reply with quote
first impression: i like it

Some anatomy could be clarified a little - upper arm, mainly - but overall I get a positive impression. Nice.
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Heysoos
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2004 11:16 am     Reply with quote
I like it too, nice use of soft edges
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BrunnenG
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2004 8:31 pm     Reply with quote
I like it. When I first looked at it my gut impression was that it was simplistic but as I studied it I realised that that is not the case at all. It is very well laid out.

I would also like to see a bit more detail in the hands and feet but not much.

The only other item that catches my eye (and correct me if I'm wrong) but I think the forward arm is a tad short, maybe in the upper arm. It seems to me that, even with the bend, the hand should drop lower.

Otherwise I would say that you have a great handle on the style.
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Matt Ryan
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2004 4:30 pm     Reply with quote
nice work. I like the legs alot. I think that the hands and feet could use some refining, they are just blocked out right now. the arms and stomach seems kinda flat along with the breasts. Also, the arms seem baybe a bit short.
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