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James Smith · Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2004 1:22 pm

Done by me for a new comics series I'm pencilling and inking for. I'll let you know more as I get it!

James Smith

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Gunna · Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2004 4:48 am

Hi James ,I think you have a good feel for fabric texture and action poses but don't forget the anatomy! The guy in the top right's left armcould be a bit lower behind him and you could lose that little glimpse of shoulder.
Make him look a bit more comfortable assasinating his target.
I think it's great work. Keep at it. Regards Gunna

Gunna · Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2004 5:13 am

Hi James ,I think you have a good feel for fabric texture and action poses but don't forget the anatomy! The guy in the top right's left armcould be a bit lower behind him and you could lose that little glimpse of shoulder.
Make him look a bit more comfortable assasinating his target.
I think it's great work. Keep at it. Regards Gunna

James Smith · Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2004 6:23 am

Thanks a lot, Gunna! Yes, you're right, I've noticed that myself (AFTER inking it, unfortunetly! Sad

) I'll definetly keep that in mind for my next drawings, and BTW he isn't trying to kill someone, actually he is running away from the cop! Her name is Officer Dennali, I think (I'm not the writer for the story). I'll definetly post more stuff as I draw it!
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