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Martin Rebas
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Here's a short silly comic I drew, mostly for trying out inking with Illustrator. The style is much more slick and cartoony than my usual style, so I'd really appreciate any tips people might have for improving the comic (for example, I'm worried about the "dynamism" and the placement of the speech balloons, but I'm not sure how to improve them).
Basically, there's an excited kid who tells his friend that the Tooth Fairy visited and took his tooth. The other kid is less euphoric because of a similar visit, but from the Hand Fairy. (It works better in Swedish, as the words for "hand" and "tooth" are very similar).
/Martin
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math
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| Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2004 6:55 am |
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whats 'fick' in english? cuz in german 'fick' means...fuc..... 
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arvid
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| Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2004 7:18 am |
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hehe  made me laugh, nice style too |
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Javerh
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| Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2004 7:44 am |
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| f�, f�r, fick, f�tt - fick = the past tense of 'get' |
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fukifino
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| Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2004 11:21 am |
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| Hahaha, I don't even speak the language, but it reads well. Hand Fairy...poor kid. |
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Mari
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| Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2004 7:25 am |
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| Ah cool! I'm dutch and it kinda reads pretty easy. I get the meaning. So funny! |
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dougbot
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| Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2004 6:00 pm |
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Ha ha. Dude that is awesome. I didn't read the description and totally got it. That's a sign of good panel layout and story telling. Nice work!
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UnAlternate
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| Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 2:11 am |
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| ha ha, helt briljant! dagens f�rsta skratt. tack! ;P |
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math
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| Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 8:11 am |
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handfairy
its cool..i forgot to mention it =p
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Wagner
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| Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2004 4:05 pm |
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yea, i could understand it. it seemed weird to read though. maybe becuase it's in black and white right now... I also noticed that my eye has to travel alot on the page, but i don't know enough about panel layouts and stuff to know if that's a good thing or not 
I think it's realy cool how good people are with languages here. You would think that everybody here was from the US or the UK from how well people speak english. I like how the community here is international. |
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