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austin108
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 Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2004 8:17 am |
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here are some drawings from images from a pose book.
Please help me see things that I'm not seeing, it will really help me get better faster.
Thanks.
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Ritaku
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| Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2004 1:05 pm |
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it would help to show us the images you used for these as well. that way we don't criticise things that came from the source rather than things you did yourself. also the man looks like he has no ass and a bit of a short waist to me. oh and the woman looks a little.... well the bottom half is facing one way and the top half is facing another, but they don't seem to fit still... they're just seperate.... other than that, the shading is a little blocky perhaps (but again that might just be the source you are using). try using a finer pencil/ drawing on a larger scale and blending those shades a bit more... they have a nice quality to them somehow mind you, maybe those darker lines that do that.
well thats my two cents, hope that helps. |
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