[The Real Mark]

Hey guys

Just whipped up a small portfolio for somewhere where i'm applying for a part-time job.

What do you all think? - needs anything else?

http://users.bigpond.net.au/marktavares/

[horacegoesskiing]

nope.
its striking as it is
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[Jimmyjimjim]

Hey Man-

Decent stuff, but one thing really pops out.

I would take that cockpit design out of your gallery, as it's almost a direct copy of the Naboo starfighter cockpit in the Art of Star Wars Ep. 1.

Stuff like that will really be a big red "X" if you're applying for a job.

Hate to be the one to call you on that, but I'm speaking the truth.

[Kamal]

I think it's nice easy to navigate web design.

Crit1: The concept art is too hi res.
Crit2: I think your drawing skills aren't coming across as being very strong. I'd suggest doing more life drawing and study human anatomy, especially if you want to specialize in character design / modeling.

[The Niles Edge]

yeah i would lose the illustration of the guy with the hammer. replace it with something created in a 3d program since your modeling skills are stronger
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[The Real Mark]

I agree with that cockpit yeah I'll take it out asap

thanks for the feedback, i also agree with the hammer guy. I was actually apply for a job with webdesign and fixing laptops. It was a part-timer, while i'm at uni doing animation.

Infact i'll probably remove half of the concept art page stutff, now that I think of it.

applying changes now.......