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IDrawGirls
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 Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 3:30 am |
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Since nobody seems to like this and I want to know why I thought I should ask.
The candy colors don't work for you?
Do the lines around the hovering vehicle bother you?
Is it too busy?
Is it the perspective of the close car?
Or the buildings in the background?
Is the subject just not intriguing?
Please tell me! Thanks.
Is that better or worse?
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Capt. Fred
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| Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 5:49 am |
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I like the big robot crane thing that's straddling the roof tops.
I personally don't understand what's going on, which is more important in a pic which is lines and colours everything clearly depicted (as opposed to impressionist and moody..) I guess.
I think I just have this feeling like, what's going on? |
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IDrawGirls
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| Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 7:14 am |
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Andyart.de seems to be down right now
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does this link work?
Not sure I get what you wrote 
All elements are rendered as if they were equally important?
I wanted the doctors to stand out.
And the story behind it isn't clear? Maybe the cars look intact?
They are not ... yeah probably it is too confusing if you didn't construct it.
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| Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 12:36 pm |
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I probably can�t help you much, but honestly there isn�t much on that image which is really good at all. Sorry that I have to say that, but it�s just too confusing of an image. It has too much going on without having any focus. The lighting seems to be too uniform and the headlights of the cars or chopper(?) don�t look believable at all, they look like flat lighter areas without actual volume and your light sources dont�affect your objects really.
I hope this isn�t all too negative and I�m sorry I can�t express better how to improve the image, but I�m affraid I can�t do a useful overpaint either.
The concept is quite interesting imo, so if I were you I�d keep that, but scrap the image and just do alot of sketches with differen persp. and lighting etc. Sometimes it�s better to start over than to noodle around on an image too much.
Hope it helps at least a bit and keep it up! |
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