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Kamal
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 12:05 am     Reply with quote
Here's a piece that Kenny Lammers and I worked on. He modeled the characters, I did the textures, shading, lighting, rendering. Then I took it into photoshop and tweaked it further.



Do you think it would be better if they were centered in the composition rather than offset to the side?

Let me know what you think.

thanks ya' all

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Barundi
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 7:03 am     Reply with quote
The composition looks great ! I would not center the players, I think bringing the subjects in from the side like that adds to the dynamics of the ' Face Off ' . The negative space is working nicely against the foreground, so no, I would center them. This image is first rate, you can feel the ice. Very well done.
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Kamal
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 12:39 am     Reply with quote
Cool, thanks Barundi.
I checked out your website. Nice work!!!
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 4:21 am     Reply with quote
Awesome work, though the question arises as to why a goalie would be facing off with a regular player.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 07, 2004 8:02 pm     Reply with quote
Superb...the lighting is just perfect. Very Happy
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Kamal
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 4:40 am     Reply with quote
Thanks Paavo and dfacto.

Dfacto, to answer your quesetion:

The goal of the image was to convey a sense of rivalry between two NHL teams. Even though you'll never see a goalie facing off with a player, I felt that doing so, helped prove the point even further. There are always two kinds of rivalry in hockey. One is the team against the team, but then there's a personal rivalry between the player and the goalie. I felt that juxtaposing both rivalries in one, made the tension that much more interesting.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2004 10:15 am     Reply with quote
Go Red Wings ! LOL

Great work!
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see
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2004 11:18 am     Reply with quote
cool ! What about some welding sputters?

Wah is that correct "welding sputters ?
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 5:20 pm     Reply with quote
Red Dog wrote:
Go Red Wings ! LOL

Great work!


ha! they'll obviously lose, i mean look... they didn't even get half of the image to themselves.

nice work, love the texture of the shirt, i can almost feel it
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 16, 2004 1:05 am     Reply with quote
Lovely... One thing though, is it raining?
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 16, 2004 2:26 am     Reply with quote
Think its suppose to be the glass, but not sure gonna need kamal to answer that to be sure
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Kamal
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 17, 2004 10:55 am     Reply with quote
Thanks!
Nope, not rain or glass. It's really just some abstract atmospheric texturing that represents the scratches on the ice. Rolling Eyes
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