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farmer junior member
Member # Joined: 03 Feb 2004 Posts: 4 Location: Frankfurt/Germany
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2004 6:46 am |
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i just finished this for the DSG on conceptart..
c&c very welcome..
![](http://doom3genetic.ngz-network.de/team/farmer/marshall.jpg) _________________ **Orange Mocca Frappucino** |
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Simoom member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2002 Posts: 302 Location: nc, usa
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Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2004 7:53 pm |
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while i don't know if i should really critic the anatomy of a robot, the main things that stand out here are that the legs seem too short compared to the torso, his hat seems to be at an odd impossible perspective, and the boot area seems a little too wide around the ankles as well as appearing as though they might be on a seperate joint from the rest of the shin.
However, despite those complaints, i like the coloring you did. You obviously aimed for a unified lightsource, the pink lighting is fairly nice. I like your use of vibrant saturated colors throughout the picture as well. Keep it up. |
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farmer junior member
Member # Joined: 03 Feb 2004 Posts: 4 Location: Frankfurt/Germany
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2004 5:06 am |
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wow.. i didnt expect that someone ever would reply to my post..
thx for you critz&comments simoom!
didnt you see the right arm? its much too long..
there were some strange things in my sketch but i left them in..
i thought the same thing.. since this is a robot.. he dont have to have correct human anatomy.. maybe its better if he got some differences..
however.. thx a lot!! _________________ **Orange Mocca Frappucino** |
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