[neff]

hehe, another try in painting a female body:

I scanned a drawing, the rest is done in paintshop pro 8



C&C are welcome
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[Godwin]

nice, i like the colours and reflections
but the face looks somewhat distorted, right eye is too far out i think

got some perspective error with the screen on the left, and i dont know about her pose.... what's up with the left arm? torso seems too long and so on
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[The Real Mark]

Great pic!

Very well done, i have no problems with proportions.

The skin though is a bit weird, just doesn't feel like skin to me, though i know its' really hard to get, perhaps too shinny?

I was also once told that the distance between the eyes is the same as the width of the eye. Thats for the 'standard' person though. Depends if you want it to look different, but I stick by that rule.

[dfacto]

Good job Neff. I dig here stomach and the clothing higlights.

but...

Her arms are too short, her face is a bit off, her face ins't highlighted in the same way as her body, which seems odd, and the screen on the upper left has some major perspective issues.
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[Mari]

Awesome lighting! I'm always a sucker for good lighting in pictures, as well as the way clothing flows over a woman's bust.

(Creepy... That while I'm guy-crazy.)

Anyway, probably since I can't do it myself but I love to see it ^^;

Keep up the awesome work! The expression on her face looks a little odd, though, maybe it's because of her eye(brow)s, or her mouth, not sure. Almost perfect

[Kamal]

I love it the torso. Very sexy.

I'd suggest working on the face more to make it look as interesting if not more interesting, as her torso. Also her arm is way way to short.

[xeNusion]

nice work.



but it seems to look better with a smaller head

[neff]

i think a little head makes her a bit, ehrm... frightening
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[dfacto]

But if you measure it out with your finger, her head is better smaller because it is more anatomically correct. This way her torso is three head lengths, which is normal
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