[jeroentje]

Did this today in Painter Classic.

Cheers, Jeroen

[[a2]]

I like the environment and everything. But not the small charakter in the middle. A green monster like "Shrek" would look better.
But everything else looks cool

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[AndyT]

Very nice. Looks like a painting that takes several days or even weeks.

Not sure if you are looking for suggestions. Tell me if I should remove the overpaint.

Click here for overpaint

I think the rocks get too much attention. I'd make them less defined.
I put some red in there and brown on the girl to make her fit in the palette better.

I also think the clouds could look softer and the branches and leaves more defined.
The way you painted it I think the clouds pop out too much. And the tree looks a bit too muddy.

I don't like most of the black areas. The tires distract from the face for example IMO.
In my version the girl looks too blurry! Still I'd simplify in the shadow area.
And all the changes were done sloppily. I just want to show the direction I'd take.

Hope you're looking for that kind of critique ...
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[faeklone]

the only thing I can say is what are you trying to capture with this picture. I think it's great and all, but the title girl on a scooter didn't make me think of such a small girl in the picture. What information are you trying to get accross, and what interests you in this picture. Is the girl on the scooter necessary, or is she the whole picture.

Basicially, I would go about rethinking your composition. It's nice and all, but I still think you need to rethink it.