[neff]

Hehe, some new stupid stuff by the neff:



senseless wip

I know, the hand on her knee is a bit off, but ... whatever.
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[AndyT]

Wow you improved pretty much in all areas.
I saw it in some recent speedpaintings ... but it's more obvious here.

Something about the mouth bothers me ... that's all.
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[neff]

little update


some more comments?
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[antx]

Cute girl. I don�t think the desaturation was necessary since the background is also quite satuarted, but I can�t say it did hurt the picture either. You are indeed getting better. Keep going!!!

[The Niles Edge]

yeah, this is pretty cool. the main issue i have is with anatomy, like the way her right(our left) forearm curves into the hand. and remember in general the ears are go from the eyebrows to the nose, and are moved up or down with the tilt of the head. in this case it looks like she is looking slightly down the ear would be moved up a little bit, so it should start just above the eybrows and end just above the tip of the nose. and her eyes are a little far apart. keep up the good work though, you are definitely getting better
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[wienerbot]

Alright I'm gonna cut right to the chase here, an outfit like this on any human woman is destined to generate serious cameltoe. This is anatomical nitpicking at its very worst but watch any episode of Start Trek the Next Generation and pay attention to Counselor Troy and that inward wedge of lust that steals every scene! Live long and prosper.
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[faeklone]

Two comment on anatomy.

First off,the arm on the left side of the picture looks like it's made out of plastercine or something, cause it doesn't look like it has any bones in it. I usually draw circles at the joints and then draw straight lines connecting them, representing the bones. You can't move the stright lines, but you can move the circles where the joints are and their relationship amung one another. It looks like her arm is broken just below the shoulder, and just before the wrist. And if her arm or hand is touching the thigh, just make a little line near black in colour just at the edge where the two surfaces are touching to make it look like they're touching.

Next is the hips. The leg bone comes off from the upper curve of the hip bone, but not at the top. If you look at your picture the bone would be at the top. What you do to fix that is to add another curve from the waist, or bottom of the ribe, slightly outward to meet the leg. Just something that makes it look better.

Last off is the location of her breasts. I don't think I've ever seen, including women with push-up bras, breasts that were so high. Pull them down a little or at least make the side of the breast look like it starts a little further down the body.

Nice pic though. You need a great background to go with the pic though.

[telcontar]

The picture looks realy great (in my humble opinion ;)
My only complaint is tha the face is rather blurry...
The suit is great!

[neff]

Thx for the comments, i will try harder to fix my anatomical problems
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