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insanelight
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 11, 2004 9:00 am     Reply with quote
This is my new image, Waiting Warrior .
It's my 3th work with my Wacom tablet, you can find more details here:

http://www.insanelight.com/images/details/warriorsw/details_warriorsw.html

Original size is 2692*4220, 101Mb PSD.
I need your comments because I spent a lot of time on it. Smile


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The Niles Edge
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 11, 2004 11:22 am     Reply with quote
yeah, this is a pretty good pic. My main concern would have to be with anatomy, particularly with the lower back/butt area. The back seems to curve unnaturally and the butt seems to protrude in an odd way, and where the leg connects to the hips looks odd as well. and where the tail connects could have used a little more defininition, as opposed to just fading. you could still fix those issues, and you would have a damn fine pic on your hands Smile
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 11, 2004 11:28 am     Reply with quote
The Niles Edge wrote:
yeah, this is a pretty good pic. My main concern would have to be with anatomy, particularly with the lower back/butt area. The back seems to curve unnaturally and the butt seems to protrude in an odd way, and where the leg connects to the hips looks odd as well. and where the tail connects could have used a little more defininition, as opposed to just fading. you could still fix those issues, and you would have a damn fine pic on your hands Smile


I'm pretty sure you didnt click on the details then....
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 11, 2004 1:36 pm     Reply with quote
Excellent excellent work. I'm a fan of realistic style. Im kind of surprised you dont do any professional work(read the website profile). I would say if theres anything negative I could add it would be that the hair doesnt quite look right. How long did this take to finish?
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 11, 2004 1:53 pm     Reply with quote
If you put painting on top of the ref you can see that the angle between lower back and bottom is too steep. In ref girl is leaning more and in painting posture is too upright.
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