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Member # Joined: 17 Oct 2003 Posts: 91 Location: Italy
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The Niles Edge member
Member # Joined: 09 Mar 2002 Posts: 97 Location: Washington State, USA
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Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2004 11:22 am |
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yeah, this is a pretty good pic. My main concern would have to be with anatomy, particularly with the lower back/butt area. The back seems to curve unnaturally and the butt seems to protrude in an odd way, and where the leg connects to the hips looks odd as well. and where the tail connects could have used a little more defininition, as opposed to just fading. you could still fix those issues, and you would have a damn fine pic on your hands ![Smile](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) _________________ ...be sure man that every
line drawn reflects a life that you loved
not an existence that you hated.
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insane007 member
Member # Joined: 28 Feb 2003 Posts: 93
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Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2004 11:28 am |
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The Niles Edge wrote: |
yeah, this is a pretty good pic. My main concern would have to be with anatomy, particularly with the lower back/butt area. The back seems to curve unnaturally and the butt seems to protrude in an odd way, and where the leg connects to the hips looks odd as well. and where the tail connects could have used a little more defininition, as opposed to just fading. you could still fix those issues, and you would have a damn fine pic on your hands ![Smile](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
I'm pretty sure you didnt click on the details then.... |
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Edge junior member
Member # Joined: 31 Oct 1999 Posts: 39
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Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2004 1:36 pm |
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Excellent excellent work. I'm a fan of realistic style. Im kind of surprised you dont do any professional work(read the website profile). I would say if theres anything negative I could add it would be that the hair doesnt quite look right. How long did this take to finish? |
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uglypixel junior member
Member # Joined: 07 Jan 2004 Posts: 21
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Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2004 1:53 pm |
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If you put painting on top of the ref you can see that the angle between lower back and bottom is too steep. In ref girl is leaning more and in painting posture is too upright. _________________ .slave for hire. |
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