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DKScully
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 1:34 pm     Reply with quote
Hi, Critics comments and advice needed... thank you.

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gothgoddess
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 08, 2004 6:43 am     Reply with quote
I like the look of it and the coloring!! I just had a little bit of a hard time focusing on the character since there isn't much difference in line, color, or shadow between it and he background....
I wouldn't want to be the one greeting him to the world tho!!! Razz
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XaV1Uzz
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 12:26 pm     Reply with quote
El antebrazo derecho deberia de estar iluminado y la figura ganaria tridimensionalidad al proyectarse hacia delante.

Quiza oscurecer las sombras y a�adir algo mas de color, poco saturado pero color

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