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ninghu_8142
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2003 11:49 am     Reply with quote
I did this last semester, a book cover. Wish to have your suggestions. welcome to my website. www.godpalettes.com.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2003 11:51 am     Reply with quote
It losts lot of details
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2003 2:30 pm     Reply with quote
It is a cool looking composition, but it is missing contrast. If you squint at it all you see is just a little blob of light there in the upper right. Higher contrast at least on the key elements if not all around would help this one immensely I think.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2003 2:56 pm     Reply with quote
Its such a complex composition... it gets pretty lost at web site size. I'd love to see some close-up details to get a better sense of it.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2003 4:35 pm     Reply with quote
ohh hehe you found the img tag, I added some info in the wip thread and I guess I was very late, sorry about that.
Very nice stuff here and I really like the other stuff at your site.

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