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Alen
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something i started.. i'll post more pics as it progresses through. |
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Alen
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| Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2003 11:05 pm |
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Alen
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| Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2003 7:39 pm |
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the dead guy has been bothering me... he doesn't look right, but i'm not quite sure what to fix.
c&c if you like, you guys seem kinda quiet  |
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xeNusion
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| Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 3:18 am |
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looks like the head isnt at the right position and the hand/arm is abit to big.
btw ... the legs of those knight are pretty long |
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insane007
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| Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 7:57 am |
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| look standard super/ hero size to me. |
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Tomasis
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| Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 8:10 am |
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too small head and too high crotch. btw it looks nice!
one advice: try render whole body quickly at same time so you're able to have control over this rendering smaller details .. |
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Dryfire
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| Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 11:37 am |
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His upper right arm is a bit too long, if you raise the shole forearm up it would look a lot better. That upper bicept area looks really elongated. Try playing with the different distances to decide which looks best. Good luck =) I like the armor
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Alen
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| Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 3:25 pm |
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thanks for the comments..
yea, i just noticed the bicept was a bit too long heh.. i'll fix that.
the head tho, i kinda meant to make a little smaller to ephasize the size of the guy.. buy maybe i went about it the wrong way.
legs are long? really? hm, i thought they looked ok. is the belt part making the crotch look too high? because if i move his whole torso down, it makes his upper body look way too long compared to the legs..
i'm lost now, lol
thanks again for the comments, very helpful. |
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geoman2k
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| Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2003 2:33 pm |
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the pose looks really awkward to me... he looks stiff and if you were to make him into a sillohette he wouldn't look cool
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