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StewartStudio
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 Posted: Mon Dec 15, 2003 5:43 pm |
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It has been a long time since I posted anything here.
This one is almost finished I just need to add some
more details to it. C&C all you want.
Thank You 
Chris
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bellas
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| Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2003 2:32 am |
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I think that she needs more black/shadows in this nocturnal pic, sorry for my english...
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EternalDragon
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| Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2003 3:07 am |
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| Yeah, lots more tonal contrast especially with her shadow. That would make a huge difference. |
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Phantom_Head
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| Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2003 11:55 am |
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um, the composition makes me think of something fantasy/elven-related. sorry to say it, but those strappy stilettos don't belong there! i think you'd do your drawing a favor by either 1. giving her another style of shoe, or 2. leaving her barefoot (btw, the right shoe as is has perspective errors, and i'd add another shadow under the left foot...) hope this helps!
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StewartStudio
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| Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2003 3:55 pm |
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Thank You for all the comments. It looks alot better. Any more suggestions on this one. Go ahead and tear it up if you want.
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kiniestas
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| Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2003 11:55 am |
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| not bad.... maybe you should clarify the image since her legs seems smudged and fat..lol. |
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Uber Soldat
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| Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2003 3:08 pm |
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Just a few things: her foot closest to the ground seem like it is tilted at a funny angle. add i would add some darker shadows and her smallest finger looks kinda funny. Thats really tearing it apart, hope it helps
Ps. add darker shadows!!!!!!!!! |
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