[Collings]

hi , it's my first post here
i have to say there are a lot of great work on this forum. first , girl portrait



second, my last work in drawing class (walk cycle)
http://sillord.free.fr/cyclemarche.gif

enjoy it

[Dryfire]

hey, that walk cycle is pretty neat! I thik you may want to work on the portrait a bit more though, add some more shadows and highlights along with them. Also, i dunno if the girls head is supposed to be tilted, but it is =) It would look a lot better with more shading around the eyes and cheek curves. Great job on the animation tho, very neat.
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[Collings]

the cycle is a combination of 12 pics.
i agree, i have to add more contrast , rework the shadows and highlights .

thank you for your comment Dryfire!

[The Real Mark]

Good work on the anim - perhaps try makign another one with a bounce in his hips, well when people walk their pelvis doesn't stay along the horizontal axis, it moves up and down with the body, also notice with people that their back sometimes curls up and down when walking, depends on where the power centre is - power centre is the force of where the body is directing itself, or moreso pulling the body. if it is in my crotch then i'll be most likely walking like my crotch is leadin gthe way - if my power centre is in my but then i'd be walking kind of like a blood hound almost walking like my arse is in the air, maybe even sniffing the ground. - but you should try some variations. I just did an exercise where our class had to draw a really fat guy kicking a soccer ball. It was great fun.