| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Topic : "Matrix Revolutions -- Updated" |
Capt. Fred
member
Member #
Joined: 21 Dec 2002
Posts: 1425
Location: South England
|
 Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2003 10:57 am |
 |
 |
Bin doing this pic for over an hour now.
Haven't really lit the mech thing, but... I seem to make it worse in my attempts to do so, so i might just leave it.
And Still holding back on putting the sentinels in (to some low level of detail). (The black column being shot at is going to be composed of sentinels.) Not feeling confident about it.
If you have any suggestions about this or any aspect of the pic, I'd like to know.
Last edited by Capt. Fred on Sun Nov 23, 2003 3:28 pm; edited 1 time in total |
|
| Back to top |
|
Al Ian
member
Member #
Joined: 27 May 2002
Posts: 525
Location: USA
|
|
| Back to top |
|
apb
junior member
Member #
Joined: 03 Sep 2002
Posts: 22
Location: Ottawa
|
| Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2003 11:38 am |
|
|
Great start! My 2 cents, such as it is, is that when I think "Sentinels", I see blues, blacks, and little red dots.
Can't wait to see it finished. |
|
| Back to top |
|
The Insane Lemur
member
Member #
Joined: 19 Oct 2003
Posts: 768
|
| Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2003 12:21 pm |
|
|
| awsome picture, That scene in the matrix ruled, after I saw it I did a pic much like yours . once i fix my site ill post a link to it |
|
| Back to top |
|
Capt. Fred
member
Member #
Joined: 21 Dec 2002
Posts: 1425
Location: South England
|
| Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2003 1:18 pm |
|
|
thankyou all for the praise.
apb: yeah.. gonna be hard for me tho to introduce the blueblacks in a major way given my current palette.
beginning to screw it up...
perspective issues.. funny values... reaching my limits of knowing to improve and fix... needing you.. 
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
Capt. Fred
member
Member #
Joined: 21 Dec 2002
Posts: 1425
Location: South England
|
| Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2003 2:18 pm |
|
|
some changes. probably leave it now tho.
I think mostly what is wrong with are the major things: the sentinels apparently aren't attacking the mech yet he appears to take damage. He should really be blasting some sentinels clean out of their rather too-tight formation, plus it could be more interesting with more going besides what is going on at the focus. Changing these things would be to draw a different (better) picture. Should have planned more but the 'plan' was a thoughtless 2 minute scrawl. No matter.. lessons have been learnt.
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
Alucard
member
Member #
Joined: 20 Nov 2003
Posts: 57
Location: Vi�a del Mar, Valpara�so, Chile
|
| Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2003 8:17 am |
|
|
I like it  Keep on with the good work |
|
| Back to top |
|
Petri.J
member
Member #
Joined: 04 Dec 2003
Posts: 437
Location: Helsinki, Finland
|
| Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2003 12:49 pm |
|
|
| Hmm.. I like the colors, but the composition sucks. It's not intresting, you should rethink it. I'll post it, if I have any ideas.. |
|
| Back to top |
|
treeboy
junior member
Member #
Joined: 30 Aug 2003
Posts: 44
Location: Virginia
|
| Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2003 6:06 pm |
|
|
upper right needs something to grab attention, maybe a more detailed sentinel looking at the viewer. Or maybe add some scenes of battle in the background, somethin like that, right now thats the most uninteresting part.
Also if you can get lighting/details on the mech thing thatd be pimp. (little tiny shell casings flying around, hehehe)
_________________
Hey Man, Nice Shot
~filter |
|
| Back to top |
|
Alen
member
Member #
Joined: 27 Oct 1999
Posts: 80
|
| Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2003 11:16 pm |
|
|
looking great so far.. keep going  |
|
| Back to top |
|
Tinusch
member
Member #
Joined: 25 Dec 1999
Posts: 2757
Location: Rhode Island, USA
|
| Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2003 7:16 pm |
|
|
| I think this one was finished a few weeks ago... |
|
| Back to top |
|
Alen
member
Member #
Joined: 27 Oct 1999
Posts: 80
|
| Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2003 7:22 pm |
|
|
is that the finished one? or was he gonna keep going?
i thought he just stopped in the middle of it :\ |
|
| Back to top |
|
Matthew
member
Member #
Joined: 05 Oct 2002
Posts: 3784
Location: I am out of here for good
|
|
| Back to top |
|
Capt. Fred
member
Member #
Joined: 21 Dec 2002
Posts: 1425
Location: South England
|
| Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 5:48 am |
|
|
| lol thanks matt |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
