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Nomadikk
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 10, 2003 11:52 pm     Reply with quote
Here's a finished pic I did of a dwarf.. any suggestions for future improvements would be very beneficial.




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Matthew
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 14, 2003 3:10 pm     Reply with quote
Hey

I�ll give you a comment.
you seem to have the main-shape nailed down so you need to work on the shadows and highlights on the character, assuming you wanna make it more realistic or perhaps you want the picture to stay line-art?
Anyway, keep it up and stay with it and you�ll keep learning stuff.

Perhaps you could post some work in the wip section and get help from people there if you feel it is some parts that you wanna get better at.

Welcome to Sijun. :)

see you
Matthew
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noxi
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 14, 2003 3:23 pm     Reply with quote
Use lot�s of coulours and tones to make the pic more alive. Idea is nice and the concept seems ok. Just work harder to make it shine like a rainbow! Smile Oh well, not like a rainbow perhaps but you know what I mean.

Oh, allmost forgot. The title grabbed my eye. (damn that hurts...) It reminds me of my dwarf picture, The Evil Dwarf. Two of those allready. Let�s make a mean dwarf thread. Cool
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Nomadikk
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 15, 2003 1:54 am     Reply with quote
An Evil Dwarf thread would be pretty fun.. Im actually working on another dwarf at the moment, Ill add it to this thread and see if it gets going.


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