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The Niles Edge · Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 11:11 am

hey, this is an illustration i did for the website Bandamp.com. the guy i did this for wants a whole band for the mascots, and this is the singer. some of you might have seen the robot guitarist with an amp for his head a while ago. and yes, he is secreting mud out of his tentacles...the guy has a thing about mud. Confused

dont ask
but n-e-way, comments, critiques, etc.

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The Niles Edge · Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2003 8:20 pm

seriously guys
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Zleeper · junior member Member # Joined: 04 Dec 2003 Posts: 10

I really like the work but I think erspective seems a little ankward. Also some more shading in the monster sides could be cool.
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Tinusch · Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2003 8:21 pm

Linework is pretty good, textures are pretty good, but the shading makes it very uncomfortable to look at. Too many areas competing for attention = headache. Not sure where the light is coming from, but areas that I would expect to be in shadow are just as bright as those that appear to be lit.

The Niles Edge · Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2003 12:53 am

allright, thanks for the crits. i guess i never really had a clear idea of where i wanted the light to be coming from, so that might be part of the problem. but i think i have an idea how to fix it...
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