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Dodge
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 8:10 am     Reply with quote
work in progress, background needs to be added and maybe the shading this is where im at so far. Comments crits welcomed

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mindlesswraith
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 11:39 am     Reply with quote
Everything is very clean and well done, but the guy on the right looks as if he's leaning forward and I'd also say his pose is a bit static considering all of the action going on.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 12:38 pm     Reply with quote
agree with the post above, he shouldn't be leaning forward so statically, he should be in a "I am throwing a big-ass punch" pose.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 6:24 pm     Reply with quote
i too agree with what has been said, perhaps you can slightly bend his right leg to make it looks like he is absorbing the block?
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 06, 2003 10:59 am     Reply with quote
thanks for the comments. Smile ive readdressed some of the points and added backdrop and some shading, not really happy with it but i think ill move onto something else now.
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