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dfacto
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 Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2003 2:27 pm |
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Here is something I am working on at the moment. I am a bit frustrated by the connection between the left forearm and upper arm, and I am not sure if there should be something a bit more than just robe on the rest of the body. Anyone have ideas, or crits on the piece? All comments appreciated.
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r4bid
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| Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2003 9:12 am |
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it looks like his upper arm is too far back, some of it should be showing and the gun should be farther out. Right now it looks like his arm is pulling back behind his torso.
The rest of it is very nice though. I hope you are going to color this. |
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dfacto
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| Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2003 1:28 am |
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Well, that IS the idea. His arm is pulling backwards and that is why it is hidden by the cloak.
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