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PD
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 26, 2003 10:15 am     Reply with quote
Hi there,

This is the concept of a star fighter for a game i'm working on with some friends..
The game is a space sim, kinda like "wing commander" or "x-wing".



so, tell me what you think about it. Smile
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 26, 2003 10:25 am     Reply with quote
nice work mate. i feel its a little bit simple though.

It would be good to see it in an environment from a different perspective.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2003 1:45 am     Reply with quote
I wouldn't call it simple, but that's just me. I've seen simaler designs before, but that one is a little different some how. Anyways, it looks good. And good luck with the game development process. Wink
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 6:20 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for the comments

The design is a little simple, lots of people are saying that.
one person said the ship was fugly Razz, that wasn't good

I'll try some different stuff on the next ships
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2003 11:13 am     Reply with quote
Very nice, basic simple functional design for air/space kinda craft, what i dont see is how it manages to fly without propulsion though Wink ... Personally i'd add dual 'rocket' thingies close/attached to the center thingy on the back (sorta like on a tomcat) and maybe another 2 small thingies on the tips of the wings for spin etc, how you do them would depend on the way you want the craft to be able to move... Basicly what i'm saying is give it some thought as to what it's abilities and functionality should be and add engines that would sorta work with the idea...

Looking real good tho Smile keep it up!
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 11:53 am     Reply with quote
It has propulsion, iit's behind the ship
you can't see it in the rendering, but there are some screenshots over here, that it can be seen.

the ship isn't atmospheric, so theres no air income

And there are rocket thingies take a look at the screenshot

there are more screen shots at the site

thanks
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 1:08 pm     Reply with quote
um, it looks good.. simple but effective. only thing i would fix is your perspective... (this is 2d right? heh).. the left symbol's position and the panel cut underneath it are in funny positions compared to the right wing.
just a thought?

-matt
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 1:07 am     Reply with quote
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..perspective... (this is 2d right? heh).. the left...


Who is this "heh" character? I see this guy everywhere!!!
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 8:00 am     Reply with quote
Yes it's a 2d drawing, and i'm going to be true wih you, i knew about the symbol, the perpective is quite wrong, but i was too lazy to fix it Embarassed

I had to finish it quickily so it could be modeled in 3d, so i left it that way

thanks for the thought Smile


the "heh" character is quite famous, i can't belive you don't know him Rolling Eyes
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