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PaulJ junior member
Member # Joined: 28 Aug 2003 Posts: 9 Location: CT
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Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2003 5:53 pm |
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Just want to know what do think about this picture. Any comments would be appreciated.
Thanks PaulJ |
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Al Ian member
Member # Joined: 27 May 2002 Posts: 525 Location: USA
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fukifino member
Member # Joined: 28 Aug 2003 Posts: 205 Location: OC.CA.US
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Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2003 12:40 am |
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LOL @ Al Ian....
Sorry, but I agree. It looks unfinished. I see some potential, but as it is, there's really nothing there. It needs sharpness, some details, and perhaps a more varied pallette.
Ah, now I realize why I thought it needed more color...stay away from the dodge/burn tool with color images.  |
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Biscuit Maker junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Nov 2003 Posts: 12 Location: SF Bay Area
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Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2003 3:05 pm |
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This is a very haunting image. Like a memory from a dream. I don't know if this is work in progress so I'll comment on its curren state. The center of my focus is the highlight around the nose-ring and nose of the contemplative demon very good choice of spot lighting. I'm also thinking that you had reference to draw from. Have you thought of making the rest of the area around the highlight darker? May give you a more dramatic image to compare this to.
I visited your site but didn't see any galleries. But maybe you're posting more here, eh? I'm new here so I'm working my way through.
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Duracel member
Member # Joined: 08 Mar 2001 Posts: 910 Location: Germany - near Minster
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Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2003 10:09 am |
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Yeah, i agree, its blurry.
"Just want to know what do think about this picture. Any comments would be appreciated."
Comments are always appreciated.
Well, take a look, at the speedpainting thread. Take a closer look over some days.
People post so many new pictures in there and if you're lucky and your picture has something special you get one or two reactions.
Then take a closer look at the topic-overview ... not many replies to most of the topics.
So well, you have to work hard for every comment, but this one doesnt look like hard work.
Well so, i would say, its blurry ... blurry and damn small. _________________ Lars G�tze
www.duracel.de Gallery
Detailling a speedpainting is nothing but speedpainting in detail. |
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