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dfacto
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Here is something I did a day or two ago. I like it a lot, and am starting to color it. See anything wrong with it before I go too far?
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dfacto
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| Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2003 7:31 am |
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does it really matter? His enemy I guess, or at the deli on the corner.
Ummmmm.....deli sub sandwich.....
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| Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2003 4:22 am |
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lol he goes "Im gonna bow up these guys... oOooOo! Deli sub sandwich!!" next pic should be of him juping sideways shotting while eating  anyway great pic. If you want to creat more than a suggestion that hes turning you should twist his coat more around his legs..and make some feet! a background of some sort would be great too.. g/j though
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dfacto
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| Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2003 7:07 am |
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YES!! Definetly gonna do the sandwich idea!
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| Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 8:08 am |
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i like the torso, guns, pose...but the lower part of the coat seems a little static...hmm
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| Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2003 7:10 pm |
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youve got the belt ties of his trench coat blowing or moving for some reason towards the left of the picture. You could spice up the lower half of his trench coat a bit by having the same motion affect the coat as well.
Whether that means the coat is actually blowing away from his body (so you can see torso, legs, etc) or just so its flush with his contour (blowing against his side) it would add more motion to the picture, make it more interesting overall
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