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PaulJ
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 23, 2003 5:53 pm     Reply with quote
Just want to know what do think about this picture. Any comments would be appreciated.





Thanks PaulJ
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Al Ian
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 23, 2003 7:06 pm     Reply with quote
Its blurry
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fukifino
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 24, 2003 12:40 am     Reply with quote
LOL @ Al Ian....

Sorry, but I agree. It looks unfinished. I see some potential, but as it is, there's really nothing there. It needs sharpness, some details, and perhaps a more varied pallette.

Ah, now I realize why I thought it needed more color...stay away from the dodge/burn tool with color images. Smile
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Biscuit Maker
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2003 3:05 pm     Reply with quote
This is a very haunting image. Like a memory from a dream. I don't know if this is work in progress so I'll comment on its curren state. The center of my focus is the highlight around the nose-ring and nose of the contemplative demon very good choice of spot lighting. I'm also thinking that you had reference to draw from. Have you thought of making the rest of the area around the highlight darker? May give you a more dramatic image to compare this to.

I visited your site but didn't see any galleries. But maybe you're posting more here, eh? I'm new here so I'm working my way through.

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Duracel
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 26, 2003 10:09 am     Reply with quote
Yeah, i agree, its blurry.

"Just want to know what do think about this picture. Any comments would be appreciated."
Comments are always appreciated.

Well, take a look, at the speedpainting thread. Take a closer look over some days.
People post so many new pictures in there and if you're lucky and your picture has something special you get one or two reactions.

Then take a closer look at the topic-overview ... not many replies to most of the topics.

So well, you have to work hard for every comment, but this one doesnt look like hard work.


Well so, i would say, its blurry ... blurry and damn small.
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