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zemotion
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2003 5:52 am     Reply with quote
They feed on humans, their souls. And everytime one's taken, the person's deleted from the world, everything of him. But from the oldest bible, she learnt the teachings of Enoch. Of the fallen angels and their sins.

She was the first maiden, and often does she dream of the ancient dance, that dance of death in the Elysian field. Often does she dream of him, one of the many who's been wiped away, but remembered, and known, only by her.
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painter 7, photoshop 7. dragged for a few months on and off couldn't fix some problems so i settled for a photo reference for the face. some may have seen this here and there, so once again, hope you like it as much as i do after finishing it.

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Fiend
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2003 6:25 am     Reply with quote
Really like it, its got a nice feeling. The clothes are beautiful. Though I am missing some contrast and some highlights.
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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2003 8:53 am     Reply with quote
Looks good, except for the ground, or whatever it is she's standing on. The bottom of the dress really confused me, until someone said she was going to be on stairs or something that her dress could be hanging off of, which would explain the bottom portion there. But I really don't get the impression it's hanging, so it looks very awkward. I suggest either cutting that bottom portion off or defining her surroundings a little more. I think the ground looks a little messy and unfinished anyway. But the figure came along very nicely, you managed to keep that loose spontaneity without overworking it.
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