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Zo
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 12, 2003 3:14 pm     Reply with quote
Hey guys, well, i've been lurking here for quiet sometime and have never posted anything, so now i've figured what the hell, my aswell. Smile

Anyways, here is some recent artwork:

Used the S.T. Nemesis poster as a ref:



larger image here



Used ref for this one:




Well, hope you like 'em.

-Zo
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 12, 2003 5:01 pm     Reply with quote
I love em! Wish I had some critasizm for you.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 1:09 am     Reply with quote
they're all nice, and the planet one is nice too.. I really feel like they're MY hands, not just any hands, it works well.

nice job.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 3:52 am     Reply with quote
extremely overrendered.. I guess that's just my taste
but the edges are ugly. sharp and floppy. when I look at the picture, I'm immediately drawn to the extremely sharp edges and not the whole picture.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 6:56 am     Reply with quote
Kinnas is right, soften the edges up a bit. There is also something slightly off about the hands, but I can't quite place it. It might just be the perspective. I also think you could work on your faces a bit more as they also look a bit off. Nothing really wrong with any of it though.


btw: LONG LIVE CALIFORNIA
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 6:58 am     Reply with quote
Oh, i figured out what bothered me about the faces. The features seem kind of flat, making it look less realistic. Try to add depth to the features, especially the eyes. I think that's your main problem.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 10:07 pm     Reply with quote
Thx for the replies guys...
Yea, I need to work on the edges, defently things i'll take into consideration for furture paintings. I've only been trying this stuff for about a year, so I got plenty of time for improvement :p
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