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Zo junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Nov 2003 Posts: 9 Location: Sacramento
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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2003 3:14 pm |
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Hey guys, well, i've been lurking here for quiet sometime and have never posted anything, so now i've figured what the hell, my aswell.
Anyways, here is some recent artwork:
Used the S.T. Nemesis poster as a ref:
larger image here
Used ref for this one:
Well, hope you like 'em.
-Zo _________________
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Al Ian member
Member # Joined: 27 May 2002 Posts: 525 Location: USA
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Capt. Fred member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 1425 Location: South England
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Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 1:09 am |
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they're all nice, and the planet one is nice too.. I really feel like they're MY hands, not just any hands, it works well.
nice job. |
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kinnas member
Member # Joined: 24 Nov 2002 Posts: 51
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Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 3:52 am |
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extremely overrendered.. I guess that's just my taste
but the edges are ugly. sharp and floppy. when I look at the picture, I'm immediately drawn to the extremely sharp edges and not the whole picture. |
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dfacto member
Member # Joined: 06 Sep 2003 Posts: 130 Location: Germany
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Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 6:56 am |
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Kinnas is right, soften the edges up a bit. There is also something slightly off about the hands, but I can't quite place it. It might just be the perspective. I also think you could work on your faces a bit more as they also look a bit off. Nothing really wrong with any of it though.
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dfacto member
Member # Joined: 06 Sep 2003 Posts: 130 Location: Germany
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Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 6:58 am |
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Oh, i figured out what bothered me about the faces. The features seem kind of flat, making it look less realistic. Try to add depth to the features, especially the eyes. I think that's your main problem. _________________ It has been clinically proven that other people's pain IS funny. |
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Zo junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Nov 2003 Posts: 9 Location: Sacramento
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Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2003 10:07 pm |
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Thx for the replies guys...
Yea, I need to work on the edges, defently things i'll take into consideration for furture paintings. I've only been trying this stuff for about a year, so I got plenty of time for improvement :p _________________
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