[bratZe]

erm, hi...

first post in this forum ... pretty impressed by the works, i�ve seen so far - no chance to keep up with everyone here

maybe u like my pic anyways



c+c are welcome and encouraged *g*

bye folks

[Al Ian]

You deffinatly have the right idea. The eye shape, tones, detail in the color part, eye lashes, hair and eye brow are all excelent.

The only part that bothers me is the reflection in the eye. Cant tell what its supposed to be.
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[bratZe]

yeah well ... maybe you�re right

was the first time that i�ve been drawing something ... so i can�t draw realistic at all ... i have to learn a lot (but there are some nice tuts here)

but maybe i�ll leave it like this ... gives it some touch of "not-seeking-the-perfection-i-cannot-achieve-anyway" *g* hehe ... fine excuse, isn�t it? ;o)

[bratZe]

maybe some more comments, on what i could or should improve? i really would appreciate to hear more on what the real artists here think

*little maerlyn crouches into a dark corner to wait for replies*

i can handle constructive critics *g*

pretty pleeeeeaaaaseeeee?

[Tinusch]

Looks alright anatomically, but I'm not sure why there's so much noodling in areas in which a solid value would work? I'm referring mainly to the cheek and the linework along the edge of the face... Why so blotchy and messy? I think you could work much simpler and more cleanly and achieve more dynamic results. Simplify!

[bratZe]

thx man, gonna follow ur advice on the next pieces